http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Talk:Animal_testing#Editing
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Tim, would you mind adding your own material instead of editing mine? Then once it's all there we can rewrite for flow. The current chopping things around is leading to poor flow and, I think, some OR too. Also, the normal thing with reporters is simply to name the publication, unless the reporter is well-known, or it's a controversial opinion piece. SlimVirgin (talk)(contribs) 05:37, 13 December 2007 (UTC)
Which parts of the article are yours? Tim Vickers (talk) 05:39, 13 December 2007 (UTC)