QUOTE(thekohser @ Tue 8th January 2008, 9:53pm)
Of course, there are also those that just
start out bad and only
continue to get worse, because nobody in their right mind would waste good quality time trying to improve the output of a
blithering idiot.
Thank you for lightening my day. There were a few belly laughs in there. The sad thing is that one will try to point this out, perhaps by a few diffs as you have down, and people wonder what it was wrong with it. The problem is that second one looks superficially pretty good. It is properly formatted, has some really nice diagrams and pictures, and passes the hairdresser test straight off. It's only when you actually read it that you realise that something frightful is going on. E.g. the 1066-ish
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[the] Persian Kings from then on chose a policy of divide and rule.
or the plainly silly
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Cyrus the Great declared equal rights for all citizens of the empire regardless of religion or ethnicity, abolished slavery, freed the Jews, introduced forms of paid labour, and provided women with equal job opportunities.
which prompted the belly laugh. But as I say the main problem is not that its frightfully wrong, but a large percentage of people working there will fail entirely to see anything wrong.
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Oh my God there is so much more
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Rome had been gradually completing the conquest of Italy
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The Second Punic War was famous for Hannibal's march across the Alps and invasion of Italy
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Greek Syncretism accommodated Roman Gods as merely the different names of Greek Gods - Celtic Gods were to be similarly co-opted later.
‘Syncretism’ of course is wikilinked, you can see the author’s mind gradually building up the whole sentence with the aim of getting that wonderful blue line underneath that splendid word.
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The Ostrogoths were defeated and the defeated Germans were soon on the banks of the Danube clamoring to be allowed to cross into the safety of the Roman Empire.
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In 453 Attila died in bed with his new wife. As a result, the Hun Empire collapsed.
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These changes changed Western Eurasia from an unipolar world to a multipolar world.
There are a few warning templates, but is there a warning template on the lines of ‘this article is complete shite from beginning to end’? But of course you would be indef-blocked for suggesting such a thing.
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Also here
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:Art...of_West_Eurasiais an interesting discussion of the article. Most seem to think it is beautifully written (the hairdresser problem again). The one dissenting voice (datagoal) is rightly bothered by the spelling, but fails to see that it is not the spelling which is the problem.