QUOTE(Casliber @ Sun 20th September 2009, 10:01pm)
Be interesting to see how long the feculent adjective in question remained on the page for google to pick up the version with it in. :\
Fourteen minutes.
What's funny is that the first edit to the article made by AnonIP 80.249.48.132 was to change the word "throughout" to "around" in that same (first) sentence, and that change (something of an improvement, IMO) is still in place.
Of course, the sentence was poorly constructed to begin with - instead of saying:
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The Tour de France is an annual bicycle race that covers approximately 3500 km throughout France and bordering countries.
It should probably be more like this:
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The Tour de France is an annual bicycle race that covers an overall distance of approximately 3500 km, through varying altitudes and terrain.
And then the later sentence, "The course changes every year but it has always finished in Paris, since 1975 along the Champs-Élysées," should be changed to something more like this:
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The course differs from year to year, and often includes stages held in neighboring countries, but it has always ended in Paris, France. Since 1975, the finish line has been located on the Champs-Élysées.
In other words, assume the reader understands that the race is
primarily held in France (because it's called the "Tour de France"), but doesn't necessarily know that it's not a flat track, and wait until later in the intro to mention that it's not exclusively in France.