QUOTE(A Horse With No Name @ Thu 5th November 2009, 3:02pm)
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The argument that writing is nothing like surgery or driving a race car is only superficially correct. There is a difference between doing something and doing something correctly. Technically, I can give Friday liposuction around his expanding belly with my handy-dandy Swiss pocket knife and my Hoover vacuum. Of course, we all know what's going to happen if I try that.
My commonest complaint against Wikipedians is that they are unable to recognise how poor some of the encyclopedia is. The encyclopedia can be good when it comes to subjects are essentially a list of facts, especially when the list comes in a predetermined order such as a biography (you work through the subject's life in order). It is often good in scientific subjects where there is little disagreement about the facts.
In subjects where a degree of organisation and summarisation is required, and especially where the subject is one that people think they are good at, but experts know they aren't, the result is nearly always poor. My bemchmark is the article on existence
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Existence which I have tried to tidy up in the past, but which always degrades. In its current state it is a complete mess, and bears no comparison with the corresponding article in SEP:
http://plato.stanford.edu/entries/existence .
Taking another example, which is superficially much better, Romanticism:
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Romanticism.
1. The first paragraph is good as an overall summary, except it uses the word 'complex' which says nothing (which major intellectual movements aren't complex?).
2. The second is not bad, except for the bit about 'natural epistemology of human activities' which is vacuous.
3. In the third ('our modern sense ...' the Wikirot has already set in. One of the important ideas of Romanticism has been added in as an afterthought, probably by someone who knew that it was important, but could not see how to integrate it into the introduction.
4. By the fifth paragraph it has turned into a personal essay, entirely unreferenced (some of it is correct, but little of it belongs in an intrdoction).
5. Two areas where the impact of Romanticism was most profound, music and nationalism are hardly mentioned in the introduction. The latter is so important there is even a separate article on the subject
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Romantic_nationalism .
6. The first section ('characteristics') begins with the awful 'In a basic sense'. Even good writers will suffer this verbal equivalent of a tic as they struggle to bring their thoughts together to surround the entirety of their subject. But a good writer is aware of this and always goes back and removes such meaningless phrases.
7. The first two sentences of that section are a longwinded attempt to say that no one has a good idea what Romanticism really is. The quotation from Baudelaire is good, but this should have begun the section. The last paragraph of the section 'Many intellectual historians ...'. is pure OR. Note the telltale word 'key' which like the word 'theme' is a mark of the amateur writer. It occurs 3 times in the article.
8. Next a section on music, even though music wasn't mentioned in the intro. The section is poor and patchy, and reflects the problem of summarising what is important in an area which is so large and varied. There is too much detail on Beethoven and not enough on other Romantic giants. Nothing on the late Romanticism that began the modern school (e.g. Schoenberg), which would have neatly closed the section, as well as connecting the subject to the modern era.
9. Nothing written about Caspar David, even though an his wonderful 'Wanderer ...' accompanies the introduction.
10. A disproportionate amount on American Romanticism, even though it was not central to what was essentially a European movement.
11. An entire section on 'Influence of European Romanticism on American writers' - but no section on its influence on other countries?
12. Hardly anything on Byron, who was central to the movement.
And this is one of the better articles.