QUOTE(thekohser @ Tue 20th July 2010, 11:56am)
QUOTE(dogbiscuit @ Tue 20th July 2010, 3:44am)
I waited 4 more hours than impatient Greg waited and still no response. Was it that bad a comment?
Thank you for your blunt and detailed comment, Doggie. I do fully understand that this was "Annex" material. My intention, though, is to build a library of at least 50 columns over the next year (for traffic and payment purposes, plain and simple) -- and there just aren't 50 "big picture" topics related to wikis, I'm afraid. So, it wouldn't surprise me if I end up with about 30 "Annex-worthy" articles, and only 20 "whoppers", in the end.
I thought that the Swingtips article at least had some rounding out, in that it explained COI policy, showed Jimbo Wales to be a violator of it himself, and suggested that some admins who police promotional content are fully capable of writing promotional content. Still, I hear your complaint, and I'll just brace myself for the distinct possibility of non-response when I write things of a lighter ilk.
(Note: I sincerely appreciate any comments on my articles, though -- they add to the payment equation. I can't tell for sure, but it seems like each comment left on my stories is another nickel or dime in my pocket. Eventually, this depressing pay scale may lead me to write a Finkelstein-style piece on the poverty of digital sharecropping.)
I see where you are coming from, I think my angle was trying to put myself in the seat of someone who was not a wiki-obsessive, as many of us are here. Examiner gives the impression of being a real publication, and I was impressed with the quality and style of the article in terms of look and feel. However, the actual meat of this didn't really work, in my opinion, especially as it is very easy for your critics to belittle your efforts simply by pointing out your track record of obsessive poking of The Wales.
I also think that WR is not necessarily the right place to review your content - it is the wrong audience to explore whether the message is getting through. You need some tame, less involved, audience. I think a bit of feed back from there, even if it is putting upon family and friends, would allow you to tune your articles better to a wider audience.
I'm going to give a bit more thought on that article as an example. I had a bit of an epiphany on getting messages across when dealing with my wife who was trying to advertise computer training courses. It was pointed out to her that she should not be advertising training, but she should be advertising the problems that people had, because that is what people would relate to, don't advertise "Browser training" but "Do you want to book theatre tickets on your computer?" (not the best example, but you get the drift, I assume). I think there was something in the article that was too much in terms of "our world" rather than the readers' world.